Analysis of As the Bombs Go Off

James E. Thomas Jr 1955 (Seattle)



Why am I here?
I love my other--I love my children,
As the bombs go off,
As the bombs go off

My brothers fall,
My sisters howl,
As the bombs go off,
As the bombs go off

Children who used to run in the streets
Now lying in the gutter,
As the bombs go off,
As the bombs go off

A mother crumpled,
A child slumped over,
As the bombs go off,
As the bombs go off

Home is a memory,
Happiness lost forever,
As the bombs go off,
As the bombs go off


Scheme xxAA xxAA xbAA xbAA xbAA
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (35%)
Metre 1111 1111011110 10111 10111 1101 1101 10111 10111 101111001 1100010 10111 10111 01010 01110 10111 10111 110100 1001010 10111 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 443
Words 112
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

I began writing poems at an early age. I wanted to express my feelings for life and the world through my writings. This poem is also an extension of my feelings. Sometimes I have difficulty expressing my feelings for a subject, so I write a poem about it. On the subject of this poem, I am dismayed at the current events that are occurring, so hence the poem.

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Written on September 01, 2006

Submitted by KingJT on May 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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