Analysis of His heart and soul brought me joy

Audrey Cook 1955 (Los Angeles)



Just a spark
as it fell
sweeping gold
in faieres whispers
did tell
as flew away the lark
 she sat pensively in the dark
just a spark
a glint in veridian/ pastel eyes
as the earth stood
beneath twilight skies
she opened her amber gold eyes
and felt
joy joy joy
an overflowing endless deploy
a quiet surge
that did emerge
songs merrily plunked
on lute on lyre
a soul emerged
like friendship
caught on fire
and never ending spiral
of desire  and everything that it employs
 joy joy joy
his heart and soul
brought me joy


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Poetic Form
Metre 101 111 101 0110 11 110101 111001 101 0101011 1011 0111 11001011 01 111 11001001 0101 1101 11001 1111 0101 110 1110 0101010 10100101101 111 1101 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 522
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 416
Words per stanza (avg) 98

About this poem

this poem is about Audreys endless love adoration and inspiration for a man named TJ

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Written on May 23, 2022

Submitted by cookaudrey69 on May 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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