Analysis of It's Too Easy For Us Girls

Donna F Newton 1972 (Santa Rosa Ca)



Seductive eyes
with bright red lips
red nail polish
on my fingertips

We sit in this bar
and say no words
you gaze deep into my eyes
while I play like I'm yours

Will you drive me wild
or have I already driven
will you be one of those guys
that will be easily smitten

You have broke my spell
by looking away
my smile is immanent....
' who's game are we playing'

You play it well,
so your reward is my attention
but I am aware that your goal
is a night of passionate
kissing

There we go
now I have you back
your desires will get
the best of you yet
Into your arms
I slide down the seat
my ulterior motive
to feel your heart beat

And the faster it thumps
the closer you are
to losing this game
between one boy
and one girl

Now that I have you
flushed in the face
you ask yourself
' How much more agony
must one man partake'

Baby don't worry
It's almost done
your pockets are now empty
so when you look up I'll
be gone


Scheme ABXB CXAX XDAD EXXF EDXXF XXGGXHXH XCXXX XXXIX IDIXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 1111 1110 1110 11011 0111 1110111 111111 11111 11101010 1111111 11110010 11111 11001 111100 111110 1111 110111010 11101111 1011100 10 111 11111 101011 01111 0111 11101 1010010 11111 001011 01011 11011 0111 011 11111 1001 1101 111100 11101 10110 111 1101110 111111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 928
Words 205
Sentences 2
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 8, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem is about gold digging women ruining good men.

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Submitted by Dnewton9215 on May 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Donna F Newton

It all started when i entered a poetry contest for my local news paper. I wrote my first poem which was chosen a winner and published. Ive been writing since. more…

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