Analysis of Evolution



I want to retreat at that primitive age
when man was wild.
I want to retreat ten into thousand years
when man was savage.

When the natural phenomena left man in baffle,
I want to return at that age.
When the nature was God
and science was in cradle.

I want to back at that age
when the people adored his every sense.
I want to retreat that period
when the life was not isolated in a fence.

I want those gloomy nights
when everyone moved like shadows.
I want those pitch dark nights,
not the exhibition of dazzling lights.

I want to usher the love
that came about between Adam and eve.
I want to give up cinematic love
which only evolves bubble hope.

I have strong apathy
towards this hypocritic world.
I have long desire for those emotions
which are based on love, kind sympathy.

So I desire a world
where man seeking for food.
Takes every risk of life
and distributes among kindred


Scheme AXXX BAXB ACXC DXDD EXEX FGXF GXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (29%)
Metre 11101111001 1111 11101101101 11110 10100010011010 11101111 101011 0101010 1111111 10100111001 111011100 10111100001 111101 110111 111111 1001011001 1111001 1101011001 111110101 11001101 111100 01111 11101011010 111111100 1101001 111011 1100111 00100110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 889
Words 187
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Modified by swarup on May 17, 2022

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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