Analysis of Mindscape Updates



In the silence.
From which the quietness of life is born.
With eyes closed.
And taking a refreshing view,
Of a boundary unlimited to restrict...
By identifiable labels placed.
And the pretentiousness impressions make.
Allow updates of a seldom used mindscape.
Take you away.
On that escapade of internal visions.
To know and feel from the inviting darkness,
All that is given and brought...
Bright with light to experience.
Has been created there and awaits,
For dreams you wish.
With eyes closed.
In a silent seductive darkness.
When and if the doing of it is done!


Scheme abCdefghijklamnCko
Poetic Form
Metre 0010 1101001111 111 01000101 101000100101 101000101 0010101 0101101011 1101 1110101010 11011001010 1111001 11110100 110101001 1111 111 001001010 1010101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 566
Words 113
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 449
Words per stanza (avg) 96
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Written on May 12, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on May 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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