Analysis of Obedience
Ruby Camarato 1984 (Oceanside)
To serve his every need and desire.
Fuels my deepest submissive fire.
To burn with passion so devotedly
Humbly on my knees with loyalty
His dominant gaze and proud smile
Makes pleasing him worth the while.
Through his trials I will not cave
For in his arms I have been saved.
As the waves crash upon the shore
With his love I will forever soar
Following him is a must
In perfect love and perfect trust.
| Scheme | AABX BBXX CCDD |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain (33%) |
| Metre | 11110010010 1011001010 1111011 101111100 11001011 1101101 11101111 10111111 10110101 111110101 1001101 00110011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 405 |
| Words | 82 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 12 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 107 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
Loving and Willing Obedience in my Submission to my Dominants
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Written on April 20, 2022
Submitted by Ruby.Camarato on April 20, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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