Analysis of Lonely



Lonesome in the midst of a crowd
I can hear my own thoughts out loud.
People around me talking to me
And yet I'm so lost as can be.
I hear what everyone is saying,
But nobody knows what I'm thinking.
I cannot breathe, I cannot rise
Everyone is having a time so nice.
I feel stuck in the midst unable to move,
But I can feel the air aloof.
What is this I'm feeling,
And why is nobody noticing?
Deep in thought, I'm lost on my own
Because I'm lonely and nobody knows.
Lonesome in the midst of everyone,
Such a feeling so silent yet so strong!


Scheme AABBCCDEFGCCHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 10001101 11111111 100111011 01111111 11110110 1111110 11011101 101100111 11100101011 11110101 111110 0111100 10111111 01110011 10001110 1010110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 540
Words 119
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 414
Words per stanza (avg) 108

About this poem

Deep in thought! I'm surrounded by people everyday but I'm alone in my own thoughts!

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Written on April 10, 2022

Submitted by doriezekias on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Dorrian Ezekias Hadley

A Pacific Islander born in January 15, 1989. A single mother of 3 (2 girls and 1 boy). I am living in Valdosta, Georgia and trying to make ends meet for my kids more…

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