Analysis of Ore Run



Ore Run
Orecars stretched to the Horizon
Two ores coloured red and grey
Soh in the Forward Engine spotting
Must keep awake Stay alive
The haze the heat thousands of flies

Tom Price to Dampier Port
Return journey could be Para
Just want to dive into Millstream River
or Crystal Pool Cool water
clear you could reach to touch the bottom
keep Alive stay Awake
This train and Soh must rail another day


Scheme AABXXX XXCCXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1110010 1110101 100101010 1101101 01011011 1111001 01101110 111101110 1101110 111111010 101101 1101110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 404
Words 79
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 7
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

Soh was a spotter at the head of long iron ore trains between the mining towns of Tom Price and Paraburdoo, and port town Dampier in the seventhies. He is now a senior Train Driver.

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Submitted by pearcemelville on April 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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