Analysis of Loyalty!



The same miss everyday? Play after play? I don't sleep in blaze! Grew up that place! No mace is grace! To street, no way! The kids come first you won't either! I'm not a cop yet won't plot or stop! We all need peace! It's all to street! Even I preach my ownself need! To you my crew! I love life I want some more kids! Won't lie to her married to her the best I'd give! Respect and just chill I believe in peace first! Find something good to live for! I'd rather I did and will!
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Poetic Form
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Characters 499
Words 100
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 185
Words per line (avg) 50
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 99

About this poem

A reflection of my life!

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Written on April 25, 2022

Submitted by devon_b on April 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Devon bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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