Analysis of Pilbara blade
Pilbara Blade
《littlegreenie》
Its a QuaNtuM World!
《All PHOTONs repair {pardon the pun} to the southwest region of your local Higg゛*s field maintain static state and await Despatch》
How far they did fly without thought of direction with no way of knowing the when or the where nor if how they may break up by striking an object that happens to lie in their rayway.
The day did arrive when a photon arrived and Struck,
a body that reflects
green frequency
Now was the time for green light to take flight on it's own,
to be torn from it's source of Purity
Pleaseplease don'ttake little greenie away、my precious frequency、so dear to me
I 'm afraid little greenie's assigned、for Reflection Duty today
Don't think of it as losing a Child
Little greenies may become Big Greenies、that's life in a way
The humble lustre of Jade
Magnificent sparkle of Opal
and Emerald
A fool's delight in Prase
So where did you come from OldGreenie? What was the source that stripped you from purity、reflected you that Day?
I came not from a Sparkling Emerald nor from the lustre of Jade but from a more meagrely humble position a、 dusty green blade in the Pilbara Heat、lacking for Water and yearning for Shade
Scheme | AB X X C XDEBE EFXC AXXD F A |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (25%) |
Metre | 11 1 10101 11011001101101110111011010011 11111011101011111001101111111111011011011011 011011010101 010101 1100 1101111111111 1111111100 11101011101001111 11011010110101001 111111001 1011011111001 0101011 010010110 010 010101 111111111011111100010111 111101010110101111011100100101100111011001011 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,251 |
Words | 226 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 1, 1, 5, 4, 4, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 105 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
A photon is upset that reflection is taking away it's green frequency Like removing a child What reflective surface emanated little greenie? A gemstone? or perhaps more humble matter
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Written on April 19, 2022
Submitted by pearcemelville on April 25, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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