Analysis of 6:58 am drabble



“she isn’t coming back” my friends tell me
but my heart says “she will”
I see her in every crowd, I hear her over all things loud, I dream of her when I know I shouldn’t
I tried to tell myself I’m better off without her but I know I wouldn’t
she already has someone else to take her home and I tried doing the same but I just couldn’t
she isn’t coming back
I wish my everything would accept that


Scheme ABCCCDC
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111 111111 1100100111010111111011111 11111110101011111 1010111110101110011111 11101 111101011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 422
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 303
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on April 22, 2022

Modified on March 27, 2023

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