Analysis of Hidden in soul

Sarvar(Nuwanda) 1997 (Gurlen)



Perhaps, my dear, you passed away
You are transparent to most of us
You are so tired to seize a day
You are crying miserably in ancient dust

You live like nothing seems to be wrong
However, if I look in your soul
In there, you are choking, cannot breathe no more
You are waiting for someone on your own

From such concern, your heart is filled
with only wounds, scars and pain.
When hope is lost to finally rebuild,
you let me in! To find the way!

After all, you aren't all alone;
and everything is a mild nightmare
You are the rising shiny sun
I am desperate for your light up here


Scheme AXAX XXXB CXCA BXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101 110101111 111101101 111010000101 111101111 10111011 01111010111 111011111 11011111 1101101 1111110001 11101101 101110101 0101011 11010101 111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 589
Words 126
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

I wrote this poem in uzbek language first. I tried to translate it into English for a friend of mine.

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Written on April 08, 2017

Submitted by sarvar.job.mail on April 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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