Analysis of Watery Creature

Scott Michael Potter 1966 (Grand Rapids, MI)



Changing skin for clothes
and rending teeth for toothy smiles
a wedding soon ensues to treasure.
Skin secreted in hidden chest awhiles
where hearts beat much less
but whose pounding for fear of founding
leave detectable scents nonetheless
eventually find their winding way bestows
a replacing of haranguing clothes.
Children? Home? Husband? Culture?
All is shed for free watery pleasure…

--by Scott Michael Potter


Scheme AXBACXCXABB B
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 01011101 010101110 101001011 11111 111011110 10100101 010001110101 001010101 1011010 1111110010 111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 416
Words 68
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 171
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

Mermaids are not nearly as docile in most cultures as they are portrayed most often today: singing lovely songs, which is the job of Sirens, and brushing their long hair, more likely Rapunzel; and instead, in rare cases they came to shore out of a longing for a normal life, wed a suitable adoring male and had a child as a loving wife, only to then disappear abruptly when the call of the sea, their original home, was too great; and in most cultures, they simply ate sailors ravenously after they fell overboard in choppy seas, or devoured young children who frolicking onshore foolishly got too close to the dangerous water despite parental warnings. The enstorying below entails the more peaceful variety, but does not complete it, for that is the job of another poem, poet, or reader to accomplish, that of the child leaving home to transform into a Mer-being once puberty strikes, thereby abandoning the distraught husband and father. 

Font size:
 

Written on February 18, 2022

Submitted by ScottMPotter on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

20 sec read
3

Discuss this Scott Michael Potter poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Watery Creature" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 17 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/124587/watery-creature>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    14
    days
    18
    hours
    21
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Sestina is made up of how many lines?
    A 36
    B 6
    C 39
    D 28