Analysis of if sleep is death being shy
when you sleep it's like you never cried,
breathing soft and steady, wet cheeks dried.
when you sleep it's like you never lost,
boundaries weren't broken and lines weren't crossed.
when you sleep it's like you're still there,
and you still smile and you still care.
when you sleep you look young as i,
no crease in your brow and no old worn sigh.
and so if sleep is death just being shy,
is it still so wrong,
| Scheme | A A B B C C D D D X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Etheree (30%) Tetractys (20%) |
| Metre | 111111101 101010111 111111101 100101001101 11111111 01110111 11111111 1101101111 0111111101 11111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 448 |
| Words | 111 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 10 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 10 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 32 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
About this poem
The poet is trying to describe how death is merely an event of nature and human emotions don't usually matter in the bigger picture, we are just a part of the great trail of nature.
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Written on January 11, 2020
Submitted by abhishek_c on March 10, 2022
Modified on March 11, 2023
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