Analysis of Desolate



What shall I give you?
Flakes of dreams that trampled into the flames,
Childhood dust that always bothered me.
The Sun was up there, friendless
Guarding,
but it never cared to shine

What shall I give you?
Reality swaps that made my day
Reclusive evenings I spend,
to catch the divine.
I dare, but I cannot
The distance is more than infinity.


Scheme Abcbxd Axxdxc
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111100101 1111101 011111 10 1110111 11111 1011111 0101011 11001 111110 0101110100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 342
Words 70
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 6
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

The poem is about the solitary childhood the poet had.

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Written on March 29, 2022

Submitted by indubalaskumar on March 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Indubala S Kumar

Senior Secondary student, Jawahar Navodaya Vidhyalaya, Thrissur Kerala, India more…

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