Analysis of Beyond Eternity

Mandy Bartlett 1980 (Burlington, Vermont)



My life has been a dream come true, since I met you.  When I'm with you,  when you're near, I feel so safe, so secure, like all my troubles have gone away.  The sun is out every day.  And, it never does rain.
I knew a bond formed, of special love, right from the start.  That you'll always be in my heart.  
Looking in your deep blue eyes, I can tell that you have the same feelings for me.  You are in my heart then.  Are now.  And, will be forever.  That will remain and stay unchanged.  Always and forever.  It's true.  Me and you.  You and me.  A bond that will last beyond eternity.


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Tercet 
Metre 1111011111111111111111110111110110101111001011011 11011110111011111011 10011111111110110111101111101101011010101100101110110101111010100
Characters 587
Words 117
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 142
Words per line (avg) 43
Letters per stanza (avg) 427
Words per stanza (avg) 129

About this poem

This poem is based on the feelings I have for my Best Friend, Gabrielle Gravelle. And, the feelings she has for me.

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Submitted by mandyb.14309 on March 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mandy Bartlett

I write stories & poems, in addition to working on crafts, painting & sketching. one of my hobbies, is crocheting a hat on a loom with yarn. Every hat I make gets donated to the local food shelf, which is also a shelter. I enjoy spending time with my family. My dream and goal in life is to become an author, since I was 8 years old . more…

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