Analysis of Fading
Adjekawen A. Jeremiah 1998 (Delta State, Nigeria)
A feelingless pain in my heart,
A moistureless tear in my eyes,
And sadness all over me.
Behold the sun at puberty,
Setting as soon as it rose
Behold a ray of light,
Fading in the morning clouds
I will see the sky and the moon no more,
And when the skylark herald the breaking of the dawn,
I will be deaf to the songs of the birds.
I will see my Rose bloom no more,
And when the wind spreads the news of my journey,
I know she will come, running under the weeping ash.
But I will be numb to return her cuddles.
Just if we could watch the sunset one more time
I had dreamt in my youthful craving,
To swim across the Nile at twenty
And to sprint across the Sahara at thirty
I had wished in my gray wig,
To climb the Kilimanjaro at hundred
And to rest in the shades of heroes
As a hen beneath her wings her young would gather,
So was the hedge over and around me.
Hail the pale Hawk in the clouds when it soars
Tell the hunters to bother not when it snatches.
Life is like a stage,
I guess I've acted my part
All is but a trade,
I fear my mark has faded.
A permanent chamber below the green,
A million lines at final scene.
A carnival of tears by folks in dark drapes,
Console my birth-giver from her sorrow.
Lower the dust below the dust,
Sprinkle the ashes upon the ashes.
Escort a soul to the ancients,
Waiting they have been in patience.
Scheme | ABC CDXX EXXECXBX XCCXFD XCXX XAXF GGXX XXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011011 011011 0101101 01011100 1011111 010111 1000101 1110100111 010110010101 1111101101 11111111 01011011110 1111110100101 1111110101 1111101111 111011010 110101110 011010010110 1110111 1100010110 011001110 101010101110 1101100011 1011001111 101011011110 11101 1111011 11101 1111110 0100100101 01011101 01001111011 1011101010 10010101 1001001010 01011010 10111010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,345 |
Words | 302 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 8, 6, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 130 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
About this poem
"Fading" is a poem written in memory of a friend who passed away at early-twenties. The poem unfolds, emanating from the voice of the poet persona, the person of the deceased.
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Written on July 14, 2019
Submitted by jerrylov322 on April 04, 2022
Modified by jerrylov322 on March 15, 2024
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