Analysis of Freedom between us

Donwan 1970 (New Jersey)



FREEDOM BETWEEN US
I KNOW THAT FREEDOM BRINGS HAPPINESS
I KNOW THAT FREEDOM BRINGS JOY
I KNOW THAT FREEDOM HAS TO BE EARNED
I KNOW THAT FREEDOM HAS TO BE CHERISH
I KNOW THAT FREEDOM CAN'T BE TAKEN FOR GRANTED
FOR ALL OF THESE THINGS I KNOW OF FREEDOM
I THINK FREEDOM DOESN'T EVEN KNOW WHAT FREEDOM IS
FOR IF FREEDOM KNEW THERE WOULDN'T BE NO TAX
HIS MIND BE SO RELAX IF WE WERE ATTACH
IN A MOMENT AND A FLASH OF TIME
QUESTIONS HAVE GONE UNANSWERED AND - FREEDOM IS NO LONGER MINE
THE FREEDOM THAT I SEEK HAS FLOWN AWAY
UNCONDITIONALLY WITH YOUR LOVE AND
NOTHING BUT LONELINESS IS LEFT BEHIND


Scheme AABCDEFGHIJKLMN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10011 111101100 1111011 111101111 1111011110 111101110110 1111111110 1110101011101 11101110111 11110111001 001000111 10111001011101 0101111101 010001110 1011001101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 593
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 474
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Written on May 02, 1998

Submitted by DonwanThePoet on April 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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