Analysis of Women of my Dreams

Michael hackleman 1974 (Fort Riley)



I always thought as you are the best,
I guess I always will.
I always felt that we where blessed with God,
And I feel that way still.
Sometimes we took the hard way and road,
But we always saw it through.
If I had only one true thought left,
I'd want it to be you love.

Sometimes it wasn't fair,
Sometimes the world was on our side.
Sometimes it gave a helping hand,
Sometimes we didn't care.

Cause when we are together,
We made the dream come true between us.
If I had only one true thought left,
I'd want it to be you love.

Someone who understands me,
Someone who knows me inside and out.
And keeps me together inside and out,
And believes without a doubt.

That I could move a mountain for you,
Someone to tell it to.
If I had only one true thought left,
I'd want it to be you love.
I love you then, when we first meet.
now, and our story is just beginning.
Forever after we grow old and fade away to heaven with you in my arms.


Scheme xaxaxbCD exxe xxCD xfff bbCDxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 11111 111111111 011111 011101101 111111 111101111 1111111 011101 010111101 01110101 011101 1111010 110111011 111101111 1111111 11011 11110101 0110100101 0010101 111101011 11111 111101111 1111111 11111111 10101011010 01010111010111011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 934
Words 217
Sentences 15
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 4, 4, 7
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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