Analysis of Inner thoughts



It's weird, because I got this feeling you would leave me bare .
You would leave me for a human with a house, cars and money everywhere.
Just tell me you didn't want me.
Spare my emotions of finding out behind these close doors and speak to me.
I wasn't going anywhere, but you made a decision and this shit is isn't fair.
It's all so clear.
I was a pawn in your story and this anit rare.
Never underestimate a human who knows how to be fake even right in your face.
The smiles, the fake love this anit right and not okay but I can't retaliate.
In due time the karma always come through but there's no rebate.


Scheme AABBACADEE
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11011111011111 11111010101101010 11111011 110101101011110111 110101011100100111101 1111 110101100111 101010010111111101011 01011111011111010 0110101111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 624
Words 132
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 469
Words per stanza (avg) 120
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Submitted by resume0809 on March 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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