Analysis of Steps
Brady Bowen 1973 (Louisiana)
hirty-six steps this corridor
in this darkened quiet mausoleum of medicine
midnight, disinfected ignominy of waiting in expectancy
I feel like I am awaiting a storm in cosmic negative;
soon, the sunstorm-cloud will drop a deluge of syrup light
into the wet grey of living hastily
her arrival is the spirit-springtime.
Nineteen steps to chaos
through a throng of carnal carnival workers
resplendent in their sea-colors; step right up and see
but only if you are garbed as we
you see, time is mercurial in velocity when fear strikes
one minute burns instantly, the next a slow fuse
the love-bearer seeks your comfort; your courage in transfusion
I feel like a curved-horned herd king
with the yellow lightning of fear arcing point to point
his arrival is harvest joy
Fifty-one steps to calmness
up into the tower of joy, deliberate
all are silent here; the morning hasn't rolled over
in dark stillness of damphaired, hushed happy-think
my spirit arrives in effigy; defiant
her black wings brush my face and I smile
Inside me it is summery christmas
Scheme | ABCXXCX XXCCXXBXXX DXAXXXD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111100 0110100101100 1110011000100 1111101001010100 1011110101101 01011110100 001010101 111110 10111010010 0100111011101 110111111 1111010000100111 110110001011 011011101100010 11101111 101010111111 10101101 1011110 101010110100 1110101010110 0110111101 110010100010 011111011 01111110 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,050 |
Words | 183 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 10, 7 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 283 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 59 |
About this poem
About the births of my children
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Written on November 12, 2008
Submitted by BradyB999 on March 14, 2022
Modified on April 11, 2023
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