Analysis of I missed you today



I thought of you today, as darkness falls upon our room      your scent upon the air, your laughter echos no more                   only silence remains- I miss your smile and warmth upon my soul- a precious touch, as you are near- your tears spoke of sadness, upon your heart- Your kiss so passionate, and now you say good - bye . Your memory upon heaven, you have my heart and soul now- winds now whisper your name and time so passes- Stars now shine, as i call your name within the darkness of night.        Your touch was upon me, I heard steps threw the house.     Do you watch me now, your presence is now upon me -   Amen


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Characters 628
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Stanzas 1
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About this poem

Its about losing someone close to you, but you feel they are still very close to you- some how always watching over you. thier love never fades.

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Written on October 01, 2018

Submitted by apoet4ualways on February 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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danny lee doss

I am married and 68 years old- been writing for over 45 years off and on. i enjoy riding my harley and listening to r and b music. i have 1 daughter whos 40 years old. more…

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