Analysis of NEFARIOUS CREATURES

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Nefarious creatures are slinking
Around your house at twilight,
Hoping to find an entranceway
To hunt inside this night.

Malignant beings are lurking
Just outside your bedroom door,
Horrors from a Lovecraftian dream
The like of which, you never saw.

Monsters from a nether realm
Exploring throughout your house,
Deadly as any wounded mongrel
Much quieter than a rabid mouse.

Hunting after darkfall descends
Loathsome things hunt this town,
Winged reptiles haunt the skies
Burrowers tunnelling underground.

Malevolent life forms lumbering
Through the pitch-black alleyways,
Pursuing every living creature
Hoping to feed before the break of day.

Nefarious creatures are slinking
Around this doom-curse place,
Primordial animals lost in time
Abominations from deep outer space.

Iniquitous alien creatures lurk
Just outside your night-time abode,
Wailing awful songs of doom
Like some horrid, evil ode.

As you're lying safe inside
And in your innocence, you slumber,
Leviathan creatures lurk outside
And round your house, they lumber.

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme Abxb axxx xcdc xxxx axex Afxf agxg hehe xxd
Poetic Form Tetractys  (23%)
Metre 01001011 011111 101111 110111 01010110 111111 101011 01111101 1010101 0100111 10110101 110010101 1010101 101111 110101 100110 010011100 101110 0101001010 1011010111 01001011 011111 0100100101 111101 1100101 11111101 1010111 1110101 1110101 001100110 010010111 0111110 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,110
Words 189
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Nefarious creatures are slinking Around your house at twilight, Hoping to find an entranceway To hunt inside this night.

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Written on December 09, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on March 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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