Analysis of The Vindictive

Alfred Noyes 1880 (Wolverhampton) – 1958 (Isle of Wight)



How should we praise those lads of the old
Vindictive

Who looked Death straight in the eyes,
Till his gaze fell,
In those red gates of hell?

England, in her proud history, proudly enrolls them,
And the deep night in her remembering skies
With purer glory
Shall blazon their grim story.

There were no throngs to applaud that hushed adventure.
They were one to a thousand on that fierce emprise.
The shores they sought
Were armoured, past all thought.

O, they knew fear, be assured, as the brave must know it,
With youth and its happiness bidding their last good-byes;
Till thoughts, more dear
Than life, cast out all fear.

For if, as we think, they remembered the brown-roofed homesteads,
And the scent of the hawthorn hedges when daylight dies,
Old happy places,
Young eyes and fading faces;

One dream was dearer that night than the best of their boyhood,
One hope more radiant than any their hearts could prize.
The touch of your hand,
The light of your face, England!

So, age to age shall tell how they sailed through the darkness
Where, under those high, austere, implacable stars,
Not one in ten
Might look for a dawn again.

They saw the ferry-boats,
Iris
and
Daffodil
, creeping
Darkly as clouds to the shimmering mine-strewn bars,
Flash into light!
Then thunder reddened the night.

The wild white swords of the search-lights blinded and stabbed them,
The sharp black shadows fought in fantastic wars.
Black waves leapt whitening,
Red decks were washed with lightning.

But, under the twelve-inch guns of the black land-batteries
The hacked bright hulk, in a glory of crackling spars,
Moved to her goal
Like an immortal soul;

That, while the raw rent flesh in a furnace is tortured,
Reigns by a law no agony ever can shake,
And shines in power
Above all shocks of the hour.

O, there, while the decks ran blood, and the star-shells lightened
The old broken ship that the enemy never could break,
Swept through the fire
And grappled her heart's desire.

There, on a wreck that blazed with the soul of England,
The lads that died in the dark for England's sake
Knew, as they died,
Nelson was at their side;

Nelson, and all the ghostly fleets of his island,
Fighting beside them there, and the soul of Drake!-
Dreams, as we knew,
Till these lads made them true.

_How should we praise you, lads of the old Vindictive,
Who looked death straight in the eyes,
Till his gaze fell
In those red gates of hell?_


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (26%)
Metre 111111101 010 1111001 1111 011111 1000110010011 00110001001 11010 111110 101110111010 101101011101 0111 01111 1111101101111 1101100101111 1111 111111 1111110100111 00110110111 11010 1101010 1111011101111 1111001101111 01111 0111110 1111111111010 110110101001 1101 1110101 110101 10 0 10 10 101110100111 1011 110101 0111101110011 0111100101 111100 1101110 11001111011100 011100101101 1101 110101 1101110010110 110111001011 01010 01111010 1110111001110 01101101001011 11010 01001010 110111101110 01110011101 1111 101111 100101011110 10011100111 1111 111111 111111101010 1111001 1111 011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,349
Words 429
Sentences 19
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 8, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 65
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:09 min read
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Alfred Noyes

Alfred Noyes was an English poet best known for his ballads The Highwayman 1906 and The Barrel Organ more…

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