Analysis of Promise This—When You be Dying
Emily Dickinson 1830 (Amherst) – 1886 (Amherst)
Promise This—When You be Dying—
Some shall summon Me—
Mine belong Your latest Sighing—
Mine—to Belt Your Eye—
Not with Coins—though they be Minted
From an Emperor's Hand—
Be my lips—the only Buckle
Your low Eyes—demand—
Mine to stay—when all have wandered—
To devise once more
If the Life be too surrendered—
Life of Mine—restore—
Poured like this—My Whole Libation—
Just that You should see
Bliss of Death—Life's Bliss extol thro'
Imitating You—
Mine—to guard Your Narrow Precinct—
To seduce the Sun
Longest on Your South, to linger,
Largest Dews of Morn
To demand, in Your low favor
Lest the Jealous Grass
Greener lean—Or fonder cluster
Round some other face—
Mine to supplicate Madonna—
If Madonna be
Could behold so far a Creature—
Christ—omitted—Me—
Just to follow Your dear future—
Ne'er so far behind—
For My Heaven—
Had I not been
Most enough—denied?
Scheme | ABAX XCXC DEDE FBEX XFGF GXGX FBGB GXFFX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10111110 11101 10111010 11111 11111110 111001 11101010 11101 11111110 10111 10111010 11101 111111 11111 11111011 1001 1111101 10101 10111110 10111 10101110 10101 10111010 11101 111010 10101 10111010 10101 11101110 11101 1110 1111 10101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 900 |
Words | 145 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 84 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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