Analysis of Hollow Grams



Distant meandering,
macro denial
the moment a slave
to eternity’s child

Caught on a tether,
all freedom a myth
the boundaries self-serving
with nothing at risk

The sum past the tally,
its measure unscored
the players outnumbered
their names to obscure

Distant meandering,
macro denial
a lens that won’t focus
—an image beguiled

(Dreamsleep: February, 2022)


Scheme ABxc xxax dcxx ABxc d
Poetic Form
Metre 100100 10010 01001 111 11010 11001 0100110 11011 011010 1101 01010 11101 100100 10010 011110 11001 1100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 367
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by sage48 on February 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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