Analysis of You and the Night



When the Night was falling
and the stars were shining

when the wind was blowing
and the moon was glowing

when the birds were sleeping
and the trees were dreaming

I was singing the song of the love

it was a cold Winter night
I remember your face so bright

like a full yellow moon
with full of full of full of gloom

I know a place where the heaven lies
its right there in your twinkling eyes

when you give me little glance
my broken heart starts to dance

and then the sun starts to rise
with full of tears in my eyes


Scheme AA AA AA X BB XX CC DD CC
Poetic Form
Metre 101110 001010 101110 001110 101010 001010 111001101 1101101 10101111 101101 11111111 110110101 111011001 1111101 1101111 0101111 1111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 524
Words 114
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 46
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

The poem was written in 2001

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Submitted by umer.adil on February 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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