Analysis of My loved one slept forever



Today , white flower in my garden
Was blooming so brightly
Seeing the flower made my day ,
It made me remember the
Loved one I lost .

That flower was smiling , waving
As if my whole world was there
It's a symbol of peace , love ,
And there is something different in that flower .

This is a symbol of happiness, love ,
That flower and plant is special
Every time I see that flower ,
It makes me remember
That my loved one was buried under it .

Every time I cry ,
Or sob ,
That flower makes me smile ...


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Poetic Form
Metre 011100110 110110 10010111 1110100 1111 11011010 1111111 1010111 011101000110 1101011001 11001110 100111110 111010 1111110101 100111 11 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 511
Words 112
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 3
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem is written by me (sneha tiwari ) It's all about how I lost my loved one . I don't cry but my heart cries . Everyday I remember and see white flower which gives me peace

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Submitted by tiwarisneha851 on January 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sneha tiwari

My name is sneha tiwari . I am student of class 12 kendriya vidyalaya jharsuguda I live near st mary higher sec school ,coz colony near Edwin street . Writing gives me peace . My parents are my biggest inspiration . Regards to the readers .. more…

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