Analysis of Agony of Souls



Agony of souls

phantom of sadness
chasing into darkness
Wishing to be painless
why is it always?

reaching the shadow of happiness
but still it always been helpless,
like tears are racing in faces
and suddenly wipe it to flow less

please stop racing
it's hard to stop wiping
crystal water are still flowing
how it could stop, if it always allowing?

there is pain
there is vain
there is good, ain't nothin'
and it always been no gain.

Hoping to be endless
Hearts are shaking like it's payless
But it all covers with loneliness
Living it's shadow to find it's happiness

No one else can explain the feeling;
Even it's been hurting
It's eyes are calming,
And no one sees that it's soul is like hanging

Changing into numbing
It couldn't help but let it flowing
Pain are terribly dropping
It always been hurting

It always been painful
It always been hurtful
It always been down full
It seems no one see the greatest fall

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Agony of souls

phantom of sadness
chasing into darkness
Wishing to be painless
why is it always?

reaching the shadow of happiness
but still it always been helpless,
like tears are racing in faces
and suddenly wipe it to flow less

it's hard to stop wiping
crystal water are still flowing
how it could stop, if it always allowing?

there is pain
there is vain
there is good, ain't nothin'
and it always been no gain.

Hoping to be endless
Hearts are shaking like it's payless
But it all covers with loneliness
Living it's shadow to find it's happiness

No one else can explain the feeling;
Even it's been hurting
It's eyes are calming,
And no one sees that it's soul is like hanging

Changing into numbing
It couldn't help but let it flowing
Pain are terribly dropping
It always been hurting

It always been painful
It always been hurtful
It always been down full
It seems no one see the greatest fall

cheka lang
Dw nami lang


Scheme A BBBC BBDE fFFF GGHG BEBB FFFF FFFF IIJK xA BBBC BBDE FFF GGHG BEBB FFFF FFFF IIJK ll
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 10110 100110 101110 1111 10011100 1111110 11110010 010011111 1110 111110 10101110 1111111010 111 111 111110 011111 101110 1110111 111101100 1011111100 111101010 101110 11110 01111111110 100110 110111110 1110010 11110 11110 11110 11111 111110101 11 10011 10110 100110 101110 1111 10011100 1111110 11110010 010011111 111110 10101110 1111111010 111 111 111110 011111 101110 1110111 111101100 1011111100 111101010 101110 11110 01111111110 100110 110111110 1110010 11110 11110 11110 11111 111110101 11 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,876
Words 379
Sentences 7
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 68
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

About the unseen feelings that is being expressed

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Written on November 13, 2019

Submitted by ruthmariesr on January 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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