Analysis of He is me



And so there he pondered on one stormy night
What is the thing that keeps people right?
Is it the small voice inside that screams live your dreams?
Was it the government, the gods, the kings, or queens?
And there he wondered how it came to be
For he now understood that he wasn’t he, but he was me
If all things interpreted was through his perception
Then God was not God, it was merely his own deception
There he realised the things that do not exist
Money, politics, essentially an endless list
And so he slouched back into his bed
Facing a state of constant, unbearable dread
For now he could see the future unravel ahead
The lonely path was the only one to be lead
Without blood and love he would live amongst the stray
So for now he keeps all else away
From stories to lectures his patience grew slim
He threw away anger out of pure hatred for such a thing
He did his best for that’s what he was taught to do
But always for nothing, its rare to find people like you
He looked for answers in the eyes of the wise
Only to find all that was known were webs of lies
Everything he believed was gone in a blink
One by one all of which began to sink
His time in solitude made him feel sad
But the picture was not yet finished, and all wasn’t so bad
So he ran outside to feel the energy of lightning
He heard no noise and turned to the greatest composition of writing
He layed in the oceans and opened his eyes
To find his bedroom walls releasing harmonious sighs
He prepares his armour for what he knows to be
But smiles in the face of truth, for he now knows he is not he
He is me


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Poetic Form
Metre 01111011101 110111101 110110111111 110100010111 0111011111 1110111111111 1110100111010 11111111011010 1110111101 101001001101 011110111 100111001001 1111101001001 010110101111 011011110101 111111101 11011011011 110110111101101 111111111111 1111011111011 11110001101 101111110111 1010111001 1111110111 110101111 10101111001111 11111110100110 1111011010010110 11001001011 1111101001001 101110111111 110011111111111 111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,585
Words 316
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 33
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,250
Words per stanza (avg) 313
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Submitted by Lucarb3 on February 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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