Analysis of Penance For a Mercurial NBA Player
Karl Constantine FOLKES 1935 (Portland)
Made of sterner stuff.
Image of athletic skills.
Conformed yet to disappointments,
He rose to the very top.
As a stalwart college freshman.
Earning accolades of great success.
Leaving what is still a lasting record.
Having him placed on a pedestal.
At yet a very early age,
Uplifted he was by admirers.
Lusting for life’s great promises,
Brought him to the NBA draft.
Earning high berth as second pick.
Ambidextrously gifted with skills.
Selected from Kansas State, his college.
Life offered him both ups and downs.
As a youth while growing up,
He was burdened by a challenged family.
Tossed back and forth with broken wings.
Still flying high with dreams of freedom.
The paths he sought would bring him thorns.
Pricking him to seek new directions.
With companionships to make him rise,
Or fall back down and lose his crown.
These challenges have paid a price.
Once risen high, he’s now declined.
During the sunset of his career,
Mental wellness drives him now.
Eclipsed by illness of the mind,
He was deceived by native talents.
Now he strives to help all others.
Those like him who’ve gone astray.
Off the courts he’s found new paths.
To help strayed athletes mend their ways.
With therapies of mental health.
To give those wavering gain fresh start.
For each of us must turn within.
And seek account within ourselves.
Each one of us must face our own selves.
“You reap what you sow” is an old, old saw.
Though jeers may follow a wayward athlete,
Rewards are still due with our repentance.
Your children, Michael, are your legacy.
They give you strength with loving kindness.
Know this; imprint it in your heart.
As emblem of a promise to be fulfilled.
You may yet rise and you may yet flourish.
Your crown of thorns has hidden treasures.
So look within and not without.
There lies your treasures, gleaming brightly.
Look within to family.
Those of your own flesh and blood.
In your children’s loving admiration,
Is where your wealth is quite assured.
Yes, fatherhood must be your main goal.
Nurture it, and you’ll be surely blessed.
Family gives one strength and peace.
Make it be your resting place.
Treasure it with all your might.
Honor it and let God do the rest.
Scheme | XABX CXXX XDXX XAXX XEXX XXXX XFXX FBDX XXXG XHHX XXEX GXXD XEEX CXXI XXXI |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (25%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 11101 1010101 01110010 1110101 10101010 10101101 1011101001 101110100 11010101 100111010 10111100 111011 10111101 11011 0101101110 11011101 1011101 11101010100 11011101 110111110 01111111 11111010 111111 11110111 11001101 11011101 10011101 1010111 01110101 110111010 11111110 1111101 1011111 1111111 11001101 111100111 11111101 010101001 1111111011 1111111111 111100101 01111110010 1101011100 111111010 11011011 11010101101 1111011110 111111010 11010101 111101010 1011100 1111101 011010010 11111101 11011111 101011101 10011101 1111101 1011111 101011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,202 |
Words | 452 |
Sentences | 51 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 60 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 114 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
I know Michael Paul Beasley, Jr. personally as the father of four of my thirteen grandchildren. While the world knows him as a mercurial American NBA player who fell by the wayside, and who has often “lost his way,” I see him more like a lost sheep seeking to be found, as a Prodigal Son with an enduring thirst for redemptive success, wishing to return home to the fold, whether at home or abroad. As he continues diligently to forge ahead, let us wish him well in all his future endeavors. P.S: A Very Personalized Message: Michael, you have a forum of M4 supporters as lifetime fans in your corner! more »
Written on January 25, 2022
Submitted by karlcfolkes on January 25, 2022
Modified by karlcfolkes on July 18, 2023
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