Analysis of Home

Melissa Wines 1977 (California)



Standing in front of you,
Bare,
Shaking,
Vulnerable,
My hands on the knots
Of your soul.
I feel your
Darkness.
Feels like
Home,
To
Me.....


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJAK
Poetic Form
Metre 100111 1 10 1000 11101 111 111 10 11 1 1 1
Characters 138
Words 32
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Melissa Wines

I'm 44 divorced mom of 2 grown kids, and a "Lollie" aka Grandma to 1 beautiful granddaughter. I have always been kinda creative I love to paint, play piano, and guitar, but my all time favorite creative take me away, sooth my soul, go deep in my feelings is by writing. No really great at any of it but I enjoy so thought I would share some in hopes to get some feed back, on what I could do better, does it sound ok. Just want honest feed back. more…

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