Analysis of An Apparent Seam

Thomas M. Scott 1948 (United States)



                           “An Apparent Seam”

(Born from a David Whyte Poem-Lyric and the Passing of Prof. Dieter Georgi)

“An apparent seam between here and there grows more faint every day.  One day it will completely disappear and by then, all of us would have come to realize that it was never really there in the first place.  That seam is quite like time, ‘a child of the mind, something we create at birth and then harden into days that we then look back on’.  That seam between here and there will, one day, seem so unseemly!  And we will wonder whatever could have possessed us to create such a thing in our minds in the first place.

By then, too, we would have all realized that we have come here in order to create.  Create, among other things, a seam to come to know ‘the pain of too much tenderness’, to know an aloneness that only fear can create, to create a division between our angel-selves and our human-selves, to come to the understanding that ‘I’m so glad, I’m so glad that trouble don’t las’ always’.  

An apparent seam between here and there grows more faint every day.  One day it will completely disappear and by then, all of us, would have come to realize that it was never really there in the first place.”   

Thomas M. Scott, Th. D.                                                            March 4, 2005


Scheme X X A X A X
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 110101101000101110010 10101011011111001111101001011111111110111101010011111111011011010111011001111111111011011111101001110101101110110101010011 11111111011111010101010110101111101111100111111011011010010011010101010111100101111111110111 10101011011111001111101001011111111110111101010011 10111111
Characters 1,376
Words 245
Sentences 14
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 159
Words per line (avg) 49
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 49

About this poem

This poem was written on Friday, March 5, 2005 upon my learning that Prof. Dieter Georgi had passed out of this life on Tuesday, March 1st, 2005 in Frankfurt, Germany . . .

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Written on March 05, 2005

Submitted by TMScott on December 29, 2021

Modified by TMScott on December 29, 2021

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