Analysis of Rivka



You're shattered water
All tied up in misted remnants
Of Oxygen that forgot to breath.
    You're Splooshed, dissolved
As if Rain dropped lost to wind
    And went back up again
 I watched you fall breathless
As if your Eyes lost your Soul's
Place. And I couldn't catch you
   And I should have; but
      I was on fire.


Scheme ABCDEFGBHIA
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 1110110 110010111 1101 1111111 011101 111110 1111111 1011011 01111 11110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 320
Words 58
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 237
Words per stanza (avg) 57

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She broke

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Written on December 27, 2021

Submitted by Censored2Death on December 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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