Analysis of Homey I'm a survior

Flora poole 1982 (Hagerstown, md)



homey I'm a survier
I been through alot of shit
People would die from
Homey I'm a survier
I fought and fought to
Get to where I am
Got out of my feelings for those rotten sorry
Pathetic  ass guys whom called them self REAL MAN what a fucking joke how so fucking Pathetic
Homey I'm a survier
Who would of known
The years I wasted on those lame ass mother fuckers
Oh what a fucking joke
Homey I'm a fighter
I fought for My life and I took my life back
From those men whom layed hands on me
Homey let me tell you
Only cause they layed hands on me doesn't mean i ever backed the fuck down
But real man don't lay hands on woman
Homey you know me
I don't put up with alot of shit  
But I am gonna state a few real known facts
MEN who lays hands on women and children
Yall some work of art
The real nerve of you bitch ass mother fuckers
Telling them you love them
Than put hands on them
You ain't no man
Your just a straight ass Pathetic  losers
That wouldn't know what hit them.when
It came to the woman protecting her and her kids
I wouldn't back the fuck down you layed hands on my son who was 5 to 6 years old
And could have killed him if I didn't step the fuck In
And did what I had to than
You sorry Pathetic  ass bitch

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Scheme AbxAcxaxAdexaxfcxgfbxgxehhiedxxxix x
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1110111 10111 10101 11011 11111 111110111010 01011111111101011110010 10101 1111 0111011111010 110101 101010 11111011111 11111111 101111 101111111011101011 111111110 10111 111110111 11110101111 1111110010 11111 01111111010 101111 11111 1111 1101101010 1101111 1110100100001 110101111111111111 0111111101010 0111111 11001011 11101101101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,306
Words 293
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 34, 1
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 499
Words per stanza (avg) 133

About this poem

Surviving stuff I went through

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Submitted by flora_p on December 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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