Analysis of Your luck I let you live

Flora poole 1982 (Hagerstown, md)



Your lucky I let you live
Your lucky I let you still breath
Your lucky Your still alive
Your lucky can't you see
Cause if I had my way you be
In a hole 6ft deep
For everything you did to me and my kids
Your lucky I let you live
Your lucky Your still breathing
Damn do you not understand  I let you live
Your lucky I packed up and left when I did
Mother fucker just saying your fucking very lucky
Cause all the abuse and trauma you put
Me AND MY KIDS THROUGH
JUST consider yourself. A lucky mother fucker
Cause your Still alive and still breathing
Coward
Your lucky you got a second chance in life
Your lucky cause I'm the one whom made all the real sacrifices
To keep me and my kids away from your Pathetic  bitch ass
As I promised on my word  I definitely fucking would
Now you lost what you ever truly really thought you had
But it okay though I knew you also cheated. On me in real life you fucking pig
Oink oink oink
It's funny how the fuck you cheated on me with your own cousin
So pathetic  and such a coward ass bitch for real
You dig
Your lucky I left you when I did and took my kids away from you you no good for nothing
Pathetic bitch
Your lucky Your still living
But let this also be a very firm.warning
Stay the fuck out of my and MY KIDS LIFE BITCH
AND YOUR FAMILY
WE DONT NEED NONE OF YA
AND THAT STRAIGHT FUCKING  FACTS
stay out of my way and my families
You Pathetic ass coward
You don't deserve none of us and that straight fucking facts
Your so lucky
Don't You see how lucky you are
Now leave me and mines alone bitch
My kids and I and my family want nothing
To do with you and yours
Now step back back off
Your not wanted nor needed
And you won't ever be
Cause my life will only get better
From how you tried to destroy me
Let me be let me free
Don't ever show your face
Any where me and my kids or my family
Is
Step back
Here's your facts for facts none of us
Give a flying rats ass
We don't need nor want you or your croked ass family
Step the fuck off and step the fuck back
And let us the fuck alone and be
That facts for facts
Oh also your forgiven
But I won't ever let it unknown what you did to me nor my children
The story and truth needs to be known about Pathetic of a bitch ass coward you truly  really are
And yes I will continue to go hard core
With the truth you did to us
Even though you think ur some king high shit
Coward please you forget
I have shit loads of witnesses of what you truly really did
So you can't say you didn't ever abuse me or my kids
You no good fuck
Oh and another fucking thing
The way you fucked I couldn't even feel it
I always was like is he done and over with it
Your so lame couldn't even keep ur so called woman pleased in anyway
Your lucky just like I fucking said

Written by : Flora Poole aka violet poole


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,828
Words 619
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 74, 1
Lines Amount 75
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,089
Words per stanza (avg) 288

About this poem

It's about all the abuse and the trauma I went through just a feeling as he lucky I let him live even more when he beat my oldest son

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Written on December 21, 2021

Submitted by flora_p on December 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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