Analysis of The Ocean Blue



I am sinking again.
I floated to the top
only to discover a blank sea;
Well, mostly blank anyways.

I saw birds, but they flew away.
I saw boats filled with love and laughter,
but they also made no course in my direction.

I stare at the blue sky as I wonder,
of all the stories told to my younger mind
about all the happiness and love;
that I would be burdened with
once I grew to be a young man.

As I sink back into that dark ocean blue,
that I know all too well,
I only wish that I knew:
that those burdens
were the true meaning of life itself.


Scheme XXXX XAX AXXXX BXBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111001 110101 101010011 110110 11111101 111111010 111011101010 1110111110 11010111101 011010001 1111101 11111011 11110111101 111111 1101111 1110 001101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 550
Words 129
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 5, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Written on December 23, 2021

Submitted by nicholasr.87092 on December 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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