Analysis of Captivated



You captivate me
To the point, where I'm completely,
And utterly speechless
You make me happy
To the point that I'm dying to kiss
To kiss your sweet lips
To watch you smile as I do this
I want to hold you're hand
Your hands hold so much love
They turn me to quicksand
Your hand fits mine like a glove
I want to smile
To whisper it will be ok
To open up my mouth to speak
And pour out all the words I want to say
My ink flows from my lips
It pours down this paper so smoothly
It stays on each line, like caressing fingertips
Speaking in fine printed sensuality
I want to speak to your mind
To scream on the inside of your brain
To twist the black ribbons that wind
Around my heart.. You make me insane
I want to console you
To breathe the life into your lungs, so you can live
With all the hurt I've gone through
It's amazing that I still have love to give
So take this gift and wrap it in lace
Put it inside a corner of your soul
So when you caress my face
Remember, I love to make you whole

A.D. Small
October 15, 2011


Scheme AAXABCBDEDEXFXFCACAGHGHIXIXJKJK XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 10111010 010010 11110 101111011 11111 11111111 111111 111111 11111 1111101 1111 11011111 11011111 0111011111 111111 111110110 11111101010 10011010 1111111 111001111 11011011 011111101 111101 110101111111 1101111 10101111111 111101101 1101010111 1110111 010111111 11 010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,032
Words 215
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 31, 2
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 398
Words per stanza (avg) 105
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Submitted by amberp.35129 on December 23, 2021

Modified by amberp.35129 on January 19, 2024

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