Analysis of Long lost love

Shireen Munshi 2005 (Uttar pradesh)



This time, this place, you saw me
Devilish eyes, broad smile, winking at me
Hands on the table, watch on your wrist
Waiting for someone on your love list

Making a move, making a move
But it's all so still
Those white beings on your feet, they seem new
Those eyes making contact is a deadly kill

Time of fall, christmas on the list
Making me amused, blossoms waiting for a kiss
Those flakes pouring down, chirping sounds all around
Your smile on your face making me hella bound

Finally words exchanged, it seems appealing
Fingers crossed, hands touched, O God the feeling
It feels I have known you since my first breath
I hope my hand, my body, my wounds won't feel left

Branches on the tree, Our souls have met
Thinking bout you, thinking bout you
When we meeting next
All my prayers lovingly longing just for you


Scheme AABB XCDC BXEE FFXX XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1111111 101111011 110101111 10111111 10011001 11111 1110111111 1110110101 11110101 101011010101 11101101101 1111110111 10010111010 1011111010 1111111111 111111011111 1010110111 10111011 11101 11110010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 817
Words 154
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

This is about a girl in a cafeteria who is heavenly admiring a guy and falls in love at first sight!!

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Written on December 04, 2021

Submitted by shireen7667 on December 04, 2021

Modified by shireen7667 on December 04, 2021

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