Analysis of Bitter Pill



The Street- the agony of our past
the uncertainty of our future
 here we live
nowhere else is home

Our shattered dreams
our failing hope
 like a bird without a nest- we fly
 seeking for any available tree

The heat and the cold
the sun and the rain
even the pests
 all are tales of our woes

The soundless screams
the bitter love for darkness
Our groaning hearts
All seeking for love

When we fought
many brothers fall
some others stood
but we kept moving

The world is not a fair place
giving us all a fair play
we are not here by choice
 this life was forced on us

Shall we ever find comfort
 in the arms of these cold darkness
 where our future was formed
and our hopes sealed


Scheme XXXX AXXX XXXX ABXX XXXX XXXB XBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101001101 0010011010 111 1111 10101 10101 101010111 1011001001 01001 01001 1001 1111101 011 0101110 10101 11011 111 10101 1101 11110 0111011 1011011 111111 111111 1110110 00111110 1101011 01011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 700
Words 153
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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The poem is about the sad fate of the street kids...

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Written on November 28, 2021

Submitted by irukarose3182 on November 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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