Analysis of Our kingdom



Tip toe tip toe
Let's play the game of chess
You'll be the queen and I the king
And the chess board will be our kingdom
Our offspring will be scattered all over the kingdom bearing the name ponies
And we will  be surrounded by bishops all day long
For such will handle all the prejudices that will defeat our Lil ponies and come to a conclusion that they'll now swallow us
I'll build you a castle on each and every corner of our kingdom
And you'll roam our kingdom riding the horses tied near each and every castle
 You will move any number of squares as you go on about our kingdom
And I on the other side I'll move on so longer no offspring of us nor any bishop stands on my way
For i watch my steps watching carefully not to tremble over the littles ones and my advisors
And as I move and you ride,
They will all sing hail the king and long live


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 110111 11010101 0011111010 1011110110010100110 0111010110111 111101010001101101100110010111101 1110101101001011010 011101010010111010010 1111010111111011010 01101011111101111110101111 1111110100111010010101010 0111011 1111101011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 854
Words 176
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 671
Words per stanza (avg) 170

About this poem

It's a poem about love, potraiting two love birds using the game of chess.

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Written on September 02, 2021

Submitted by tshifhiwaboanerges on November 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Tshifhiwa Lavhengwa

Tshifhiwa Lavhengwa is a young published author who lives in South Africa limpopo, he's well known for his beautiful poetry book tittled the bleeding pen which restored hope to many brocken souls. more…

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