Analysis of Doting forever

Jozef Milko 1960 (Bratislav)



Time enough
flashing candle
cup of wine

tenderness in us

we can fly
about the sky
in my mind

we can be sailing
two flat hand are a ship
drift on your body

we can die
hateful
tired
lonely


Scheme XAX X BBX XXC BAXC
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1010 111 10001 111 0101 011 11110 111101 11110 111 10 10 10
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 206
Words 46
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Written on November 16, 2021

Submitted by jozef_m on November 16, 2021

Modified on March 28, 2023

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