Analysis of First Know my Darkness



You hesitate, I really understand.
I too am afraid of the obscurity.
The darkness shuts my throat with its hand.
But come along, look at my nudity,
my blackest fears, irrationality.
I will explain, what caused these to arise,
and tell you things others consider lies.
Come with me then, so you will know this side,
the one that hurts, and doesn’t please your eyes.
Only after that, tell me we’re friends alright.


Scheme ABABBCCDCE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11011001 11101100100 010111111 1101111100 110100100 1101111101 0111100101 1111111111 011101111 1010111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 416
Words 82
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 321
Words per stanza (avg) 73

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Submitted by ludy_b on November 15, 2021

Modified by ludy_b on November 19, 2021

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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