Analysis of Dark skin



A young man with ambitions great,
Went out in the world to challenge fate.
What he was met with, was completely unexpected,
It shook him o the core, and left him wounded.

He had skills which had never been seen,
But anyone he approached was always mean.
Not because he was young, not because he had a rebellious spark,
They were mean to him just because his skin was dark.

The young man wandered the streets day and night,
Wondering whether his dark skin was really the reason of his plight.
He was insulted and humiliated wherever he went,
Faced everywhere with hate and resentment.

The young man's heart was too soft to bare it,
He wanted to escape the miserable pit.
They poor young man found solace in the loop of rope,
With him perished his bright hope.

What do those cruel people win,
By calling people like that young man vermin.
Do these people really think that someone as great as them is none,
When the acts committed by them are so inhuman.

We have to learn to stop this nonsensical prejudice,
We have to save the innocent people from that unyielding vice.
What's wrong if their skin in dark?
Why does this small difference make them the reciever of a scathing remark?

Learn to respect everyone, no matter their appearance,
Stop filling your head with utter nonsense.
Everyone deserves pride and dignity,
No matter what their nationality.
                                  


Scheme AAXX BBCC DDXX EEFF GGHH XXCC XXII
Poetic Form
Metre 01110101 110011101 111111010010 11110101110 111111011 110101111 1011111011100101 101111011111 0111001101 10010111110010111 110100010001011 110110010 0111111111 110101010001 111111000111 1110111 11110101 11010111110 111010111111111 1010101111010 11111110100100 1111010010110101 1111101 11111001101101001 1101101101010 1101111010 100110100 110110100 1
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,432
Words 275
Sentences 16
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on November 09, 2021

Submitted by Coco1808! on November 09, 2021

Modified on April 25, 2023

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