Analysis of A piece of me



        A piece of me
    Has been suffering
Throughout from
Carrying on with the burden
Of torch pain and
      injustice of defeat
No longer sustain
With life struggle
In seeking for mercy of help
Like a sinking boat
Lost its own direction
in the midst of crisis
Drowning in the deep ocean
With the calling of rescuing
From the desperate need
To be free from waiting
Of facing death
In the prayer of miracle
Guiding through with obstacle
    To learn that life is tough
        Never give up; stay stronger
To be tougher than life
To beat the odd
Conquer the quest of fear
To champion the cause


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJDKDBLBMHHNOPQRS
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 0111 11100 011 10011010 1110 010101 11001 1110 01011011 10101 111010 001110 1000110 10101100 10101 111110 1101 0011100 1011100 111111 1011110 111011 1101 100111 110001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 609
Words 110
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 460
Words per stanza (avg) 106

About this poem

This poem showcase with the ups and downs and the struggle that life face us during our own time. Our struggle and failure strength us to become a better and stronger person.

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Written on November 08, 2021

Submitted by Hon on November 08, 2021

Modified by Hon on November 08, 2021

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