Analysis of The birds are flying south.



You go without me.
But take me with you.
My hope you have.
I cope some more.

Fear not my end.
But new beginnings.
My love you have.
I cope some more.

Sleep on one side.
Yet be strong.
My gratitude you have.
I cope some more.

Follow your dreams.
Trust your friends.
My gifts you have.
I cope some more.

Love your new heart.
Such heart you love.
My faith you have.
I cope some more.


Scheme xxaB xxaB xxaB xxaB xxaB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11011 11111 1111 1111 1111 11010 1111 1111 1111 111 11011 1111 1011 111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 361
Words 77
Sentences 20
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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Leaving for winter.

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Written on November 04, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 04, 2021

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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