Analysis of Untitled 03

r.m.b 2004 (Lynwood)



As I lay against my pillow
I drift into a dream where it’s just my body and soul.
Standing in one corner surrounded by the beauty
that God himself created, the nature.
The waves begin to roar with anger
And I, just my body and soul,
drown in it.
My self control has diminished for a second
But I regain it once the waves find their way back home.
At last,
I stand in silence and seek no validation from nature,
I only seek peace.


Scheme ABCDDBEFGHDI
Poetic Form
Metre 11101110 11010111111001 1001100101010 1101010010 010111110 01111001 101 110110101010 1101110111111 11 11010011010110 11011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 422
Words 85
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 334
Words per stanza (avg) 85

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Escape from reality

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Written on September 14, 2021

Submitted by roselynmariee08 on October 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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