Analysis of Eighteen



I am an adult.
I’m behind in school,
I’m thinking about boys,
I’m staying up late,
I’m drinking alcohol,
I’m calling my mom.

My Dad is old.
He’s changing his passwords,
He’s ignoring my mom,
He’s mad at me,
He’s refusing to talk,
He’s calling me,
He’s hanging up,


Scheme XXXXXA XXABXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 10101 110011 11011 11010 11011 1111 11011 101011 1111 101011 1101 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 273
Words 49
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 7
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

A simple poem about a daughter growing apart from her father as she ages.

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Submitted by ananya02rm on October 17, 2021

Modified on April 11, 2023

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