Analysis of IN A DUSTY, ANCIENT MANOR



In a dusty, manor
Hidden beneath the floor,
Ancient evil lurks.

Floorboards creaking
Though nothing living stirs,
No-one ever dares enter.

Only phantoms dwell
In this dilapidated place,
Nothing dares come.

Hidden in the night
Shadowy figures stirring,
Nothing living here.

Dust demons appear
Scaring trespassers away,
In the outside world.

Even mice refrain
From entering the manor,
Nothing good lives here.
An evil old house
Once home to great gentry,
Now only skeletons.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AXX BXA XXX XBC XXX XACXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 001010 100101 10101 110 110101 1110110 10101 0101001 1011 10001 1001010 10101 11001 10101 00111 10101 1100010 10111 11011 111110 110100 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 523
Words 84
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 6, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 12

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In a dusty, manor Hidden beneath the floor, Ancient evil lurks.

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Written on March 12, 2014

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on October 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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