Analysis of To my one true love



To my one true love

You are nothing like I have imagined
You are amazing,a definite beauty.
First sight I made it went straight to your face,my eyes we’re shattered.

You are out of this world
Nothing I have ever seen
A rare breed indeed
A cherry on top
Missing pattern of my puzzle

It’s sad that I did you wrong
It was worthless
My intentions were pure and gold
I wish you can take me back some day
I love no one else but you and it’s only you

When my sentiments find you
Please please take my words into heart
Let’s take things back to the way they were
You are my dedication,my imagination;my hope and dream that I live to fulfill

They say the knight is young
But my knight was short when I met you
Do you still remember ?
Full of color,sitting on the edge of the stairs.

Secluded from all of what was happening
Just us alone,connecting our emotions
For the time
It felt unreal
Surely that meant forever

Just like in the movies
“Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet”
But nothing else can come close to you

When you came into my life
My heart was empty
But you filled it with love,peace and joy
Now you left,you left a hole so deep
I don’t even know how deep it is

Please please come into my life
I got so much to show you
There’s one thing that unifies you
You are a follower of your heart.

Just like in a Japanese anime
“Love is like a surprising attack
It comes unexpected”
You took me by a storm

After we fell
It left me in pieces
But they say when you love someone
Let them go they will come back to you
If they are meant for you

Forever more
You will be what I’ve been looking for
My darling forever
Forever ever

Could I be day dreaming too much ?
Just like in the movies
True love is nothing but a fairy tale
But I hope this tale can live to tell many tales.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1110111010 11110010 11111111111010 111111 1011101 01101 01011 10101110 1111111 1110 10100101 111111111 111111101101 1110011 11111011 111110110 11111101111101 110111 111111111 111010 111101101 01011111100 11110010 101 1101 1011010 110010 1011 10011 1011 110111111 1110111 11110 11111101 11110111 111011111 1110111 1111111 111111 110100111 1100011 111001001 11010 111101 1011 111010 1111111 111111111 111111 0101 111111101 110010 01010 11111011 110010 1111010101 111111111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,750
Words 361
Sentences 7
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 5, 5, 4, 4, 5, 5, 5, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to my one true love Jadean ;I love her so much but I messed up and I hurt and caused her pain but now I’m so remorseful and I love to regret that ,I wish I can be with her and tell her how sorry I am,with these sentiments I express how sorry I am and how much I love her.

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Written on September 30, 2021

Submitted by romeomtshali77 on October 02, 2021

Modified on March 19, 2023

1:48 min read
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